As part of feedback, we previewed the first draft of the music video to our classmates and our teacher. Above are 2 feedback sheets filled in, one from our teacher and one from our classmate. What I found and learned from the feedback was that people enjoyed the silhouette scenes within the video and enjoyed the lighting, transitions, the performance and the visuals. However, what they disliked and need improving was that it ends too abruptly, needs more emphasis on the lip sync, exaggeration on the performance is needed, needs more variety, the narrative needs more of an emphasis and more cinematography on the dance sequences. By taking the feedback on board, I will be able to improve upon my next draft for the music video and ensure that all things that the feedback said needs improving will be improved.
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