Feedback on our Pitch from Class Members

This is a powerpoint presentation containing the feedback that our group received for the pitch presentation for our artist: 'JAZMINE'.

From the feedback, there was a variety of different things that my classmates liked about the pitch. For example, what I found they liked was the animatic storyboard for the potential music video, good biography, good explanations on points about JAZMINE, we were really in-depth and descriptive, a well-thought out narrative, artist fits well with the genre of music and, a good and detailed digipak created by myself. However, there were a couple of areas that my classmates thought that we culd improve on. For example, the logo typography of 'TEAM CAPTAIN' wasn't necessarily everyone's taste, along with some repetitive scenes within the animatic and, developing the narritve more. 

By taking into account the feedback given to our group, we will ensure to evaluate them and improve upon the feedback in order to make our pitch, our artist, our typography font and the narrative and shots for our music video.